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Switchblade Symphony Ch.1Part2 by ~Rabiji:iconRabiji:



"Are you okay?" Nia wondered up at Naomi.

Naomi looked at her, "..." She didn't say anything.

"Are. You. Going. To. His. Concerttttt.?" Nia broke it down to Naomi.

"oh...OH!! YEAH! yeah yeah yeah!" Naomi laughed.

"Yay!"  Nia heard something, " Come onn!! Or it'll get too crowded later!" she ran off.

"Uhh..!" Naomi ran after her, "wait up!"

Nia ran off through the people and towards a loud, crowded area. Naomi just quickly followed along. As they got closer, music blared out at them. Loud rock music played around the arena, people's screams and cheers stood their own against the music in volume.

"Holy shit!" Naomi covered her ears quick.

"Yeah, I know!" The girl laughed
Nia's skin became pitch black and started turning into smoke, allowing her to quickly slip through the crowd up to the front. Her body became solid once more as she began dancing and doing as the others did.

Naomi's eyes traveled around throughout the crowd, none of them looked relatively close to human. Upstage stood a tall man, shoulder length red hair, dark cloths and solid black eyes. He played a guitar, it matched Naomi's, but it was black. The sound of the guitar playing echoed through the crowd, sending the crowd into waves of cheers and dance. Naomi looked above her, hanging from the above balcony was a ladder. She reached for it, grabbing it with one hand. As much as she pulled, it refused to release, so she threw her other arm up and grabbed the ladder.
  She pulled her body up, climbing the ladder with her hands. Her feet left the ground, swinging from side to side as she climbed, her hair waving around with her movement. She shook her head and spat out strands of hair.
  Naomi climbed to the balcony, then repeated the climbing process until she reached the seventh floor.

"Oopsy daisy!" she laughed at herself as her hand slipped.
" So you're her wielder, eh?" she walked onto a window sill, took off Angellus, and watched.
She sat there, watching, her ears felt like they were about to BLOW from the intensity of the music. "What time is it?" she thought, looking at her wrist and expecting a watch to be strapped there, "damn..." she forgot the watch back at Shikone's house.
A hologram appeared from a metal buckle on Angellus's strap, showing the time: 10:45PM.

She sat there, watching him closely, constantly shifting her eyes to the guitar..

   -2:00AM-

"Alright ladies and gents," he drank some water, "That was the last one I'll be doing tonight. I'd like to thank you all for comming out to see me, you are an awesome audience."
He turned his attention to the microphone, adjusting it and noticed women crawling up on stage.
"Woah momma!" he laughed nervously, "Alright ladies, i love y'all just as much, but lets keep our distance..." he backed up with another nervous laugh.
   
  Women crawled on the stage and charged for him. Everyone, like a tsunami wave,  flooded the stage as the crew backed up as far as the walls would let them.
  "Shit!" Yo man, get K-Keoshi out here!, " Kyo panicked, "just tell him not to kill anyone this time..!"
The drummer stepped on someone's hand, apologized and ran off backstage.
"Keoshii!!" He called out as he ran towards a dark figure, "Kyo needs you upstage!" he told Keoshi, breathing hard.
Keoshi turned, his red eyes glared through his hair with an extremely annoyed feel to them. He said nothing, just watched and listened: He could hear the thrilled audience from outside getting closer.
"He says, 'don't kill anyone this time,' " The drummer told Keoshi, in stutters almost, fearing for his life.
Keoshi stared at him, a red aura outlined the drummer as his feet began lifting off the ground.
"Ke-Keoshi...!" the drummer begged, his body became paralyzed and his eyes start turning white as a blue mist came out his mouth and absorbed into Keoshi's skin.

"KEEOSHI!!" Kyo's voice rang out at him.

Keoshi completely dropped the drummer, leaving him to helplessly fall down and against the cement floors; an echo ran through the hall as his head hit the ground and knocked him out completely.
Keoshi walked on, stepping over the unconscious body and heading for the entrance to the stage. He moved the curtain with one hand, closing his eye as the light came into it.
Kyo noticed him, "Ge-get em off!!" He pleaded, pushing someone away from him.

Keoshi's tall, dark figure walked onto stage. His red hair covered over his eyes, his long, jet black pants fell over his shoes and his shirt stretched over and below his belt. He matched Kyo almost exactly.

Everyone began to back off slowly as Keoshi came closer. His stood there and apparently glared at a woman. He bared his fangs; she was too close. His foot came back and released forward, slamming into the woman's head hard, sending her airborne into the crowd. Her body flew, turning and slamming into a wall.
  She got up, blood dripping from shattered bone that reached out from under her flesh, and looked at him then ran for her life. The crowd followed her example, quickly departing from the stage.
Some insisted on staying and going towards Kyo.
Dark being began forming from Keoshi now black aura. Their bodies, completely black, all but their piercing red eyes. They began attacking the crowd, people running even more now.

  Naomi woke up to frantic screams ringing through her ears now. Raising her head, she looked at the wall in her sight.  

A black dragon charged and collided with the brick wall. Its sharp teeth bit through and destroyed the wall. Black flames escaped from its mouth and collided with the ground.
As the dragons black fire hit them, bodies began to drop to the ground, unconscious.
The whole area cleared of the the frantic audience, everything fell into a death-like silence. Nothing moved. The dark beings came back and merged with Keoshi's dark aura.
Bodies lay everywhere.

Kyo and his crew sat upstage, on their butts, shaking.
From behind Keoshi, they had seen nothing except the frantic audience, but his aura made their blood run colder.

"Th-the hell just happened," one of the members stuttered.

"I don't know, man, but just keep clear of him," Kyo stood stood to his feet. He bent over and patted his pants lightly, making dust come off them.

Naomi was too afraid to turn and see where the dragon came from.

The others stood and cleared the stage. Keoshi stood there, his eyes slowly traveling corner to corner; he felt a weird aura. His eyes set on a bright figured, glaring at it.
The demons and dragon formed and released from his body, attacking the figure.

She managed to slowly turn her head and see him.

"K-kyo..?" she thought, mistaking Keoshi for Kyo.

Naomi's figure stood there, her eyes widened, her heart sped up as the creatures flew at her. No movement came from her legs, she stood frozen.
  Alarms rang in her head, LOUD alarms.
"Move...!" she looked at her legs and back up,quickly, "MOVE!!" she commanded, panicking.

The dragon neared her, making her scream in fear.
Startled birds took off in a panic as a shriek left Naomi's mouth, echoing throughout the city. Her legs turned and frantically ran away. She jumped right off the window sill, holding Angellus tightly, concentrating only on the next solid object to land on. Air fills her shirt, making it float up; she pated it and it fell back down against her body as her feet hit the ground. She landed and dashed forward, away from the creatures.

She turned a corner, leaving Keoshi's sight, still running. She could still hear them roaring.
"You gonna regret this!" she came into a corner, hiding, as she rubber her arms furiously to warm them.
"You can't exile Naomi!" she growled, "Now I'm out here with these FREAKS!" her teeth chattered as she cursed at her previous city.
  "I c-cant live out here...!" she chattered.

Her heart still in a mad race, she breathed hard, her chest hurting.
A wind blew by, moving Naomi's bangs about her face. They danced on her face, irritating it; strands of blue silky hair went into her mouth.
Naomi very quickly became frustrated. She growled and quickly slapped her hands against her face, getting her hair in a hold. Rapidly, she collected them and planted them behind her ears.
Her back hit against the wall and slid down to a sitting position. Her knees bent up and she hugged them then lay her head down on them.
  "I c-cant live out here..." she wanted to cry.
Images of the creatures rushed through her head, then Keoshi's image came. She found herself breathless almost, about to scream as his eyes glared in through her mind. She felt an almost physical burn in her body from his glare. It felt like she was trapped within a twister of flames.

"Stop stop stopp!!" she banged her fists against her head  until she changed her mental images.

"That can't be him...!" she cried in her head, "cant be him...!" her body shook, "he'll kill me for sure..!" a tear ran down her face and into her mouth as she stared down at the ground, crying in fear.
©2008-2009 ~Rabiji
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Part ONE: [link]

:) This is part two
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now I'm confused....

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I donno...I'll have to read it again....

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alright.
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I'd tell you to go to my profile then provide a link, but my name's right up there lazy.
:D

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I needed fulfillment,
I found what I need in you.

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alrighty :D

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