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Switchblade Symphony Ch.1Part1 by ~Rabiji:iconRabiji:



A tall, slender female, her hair tied up, glasses before her eyes, stood and read from a very thick, dark colored law book.

" You're only granted item for protection will be this, " she stopped as another woman handed her a white guitar that she took and placed it on the ground outside of the gates, "We are not permitted to grant you anything else."

She licked her index finger and pressed it against a page and turned the page then adjusted her glasses.
The people of the city silently watched as the first and only exile in Eastern Gates history took place.
"..And as of December 15 6636, you, Naomi Kishijue Yukiko, are banished from the Eastern Gates for life. You may never again step foot on Easten Gates territory."

she raised her face as she closed the law book.

A tall female, blue hair and eyes, pale skin and a pair of jeans and t-shirt on stood on a silver levitating platform with her hands cuffed behind her back. Her eyes looked to the ground then raised up at the exiled female.

"May the gods have mercy on you."

Their two eyes met each other in a silent stare.

"Shikone...don't do this to me..." the cuffed female thought.

"I'm sorry, Naomi..." the other female turned her back on the closing gates and walked away. The winds blew against her, sending her long, silky hair flying behind her.
The people of Eastern Gates began to silently turn and leave the scene as the colossal, thick silver Eastern Gates began to close with a creaking sound that eerily echoed through the silent Eastern city and the misty land of Purgatory.

An almost booming sound left the gates as they collided with each other and locked.
Naomi watched them walking away as her cuffs automatically released and the levitating platform released her feet from their magnetic hold. She jumped off the platform and onto the dead, dusky ground; mist whooshed away from her as she went and picked up the guitar, then strapped it to herself.

"A guitar??! That's it? How am I supposed to protect myself with this thing?!" Naomi shouted.

"This is Angellus, find his twin, Demona. They look alike, Demona is black though. Find her." An old female,white hair and silver eyes told Naomi from behind the gates then quickly left.

Naomi turned and began to walk into the gray, thick mist that dominated Purgatory. It wrapped around her as the wind blew against it.
She began to disappear into the mist.

"Shit...fuckin' idiots exiling me....," Naomi breathed hard, "They'll regret this!" she ran her hand across and over her eyes, wiping away a crystal tear.

She walked on, Angellus strapped against her tall,slender back. She makes one hand into a fist and the other a socket, bringing the two together and rubbing them against each other.

"It's so c-cold.." she stopped and brought her hands up to her mouth, breathing hot mouthfuls of air onto them in hopes of hot oxygen transferring to them.

Naomi began again into the white-gray mist that dominated the area. The city's people had stopped and were watching from behind the closed silver gates, sorrow in their hearts, as Naomi disappeared into the mist.

"I hope she'll be ok," a lady spoke, turning her back to the gate and walking away.
Naomi vanished and they all began their ways home.

She rubbed her arms, left hand to right arm and right hand to left arm, as she continued on her way. With nothing completely clear due to the thick mist, she was unsure of what to expect in this lifeless land.

"Eeep!!" she exclaimed as she tripped on something and fell forward.

She stepped forward in rushed steps and regained her balance. Naomi turned her head slowly, afraid to find out what she tripped on.

"AAHHH!!!" a blood curling scream left as she lost balance and fell backward against the dirt ground.

A full skeleton lay before her, the skin ripped from the bones along with the flesh. The skull faced her, a white skeletal creature crawled out of the empty eye socket. It looked over at Naomi, its hind legs holding up the front body. The bugs front legs squirmed around. A sound of an exoskeleton come from the bugs body as it moved from one eye socket and into the nose holes. Its long, white body trailed
along.
Naomi's body trembled slightly, her skin gone pale and her eyes widened more as mist around her cleared, revealing more skeletons of both human and non human. She screamed, turning over and pushing forward with her feet, she pushed herself into an upright position and raced forward, Her sneakers smashed against and into bones as she ran.
Geysers emerged from the mist, they grew off the ground blowing out steam that thickened into mist into the environment. Naomi stopped quick, her feet dragging, as she attempted to avoid accidentally plummeting her body into the massive cavity of the geyser. She ran around the geyser, going deeper into the thick mist and disappearing into it.
Her heavy breaths rose and fell as she frantically continued to run.

-Four days later-

Her figure sat on the cold, broken cement, her knees up with her arms and head resting on them. Naomi's stomach growled furiously. Noise was all around, people walked around more today then the other days.
She found civilization after a few days of wondering in the mist. Her body had collapsed from the lack of food and energy. Someone found the unconscious body and brought it into the city, then just left her with some food.

Naomi woke up and downed the food.

She looked up, the only thing she could feel was Angellus strapped to her.

"Hey, nice guitar!" a random voice complimented.
"Hmm..." She looked up, her vision cleared, "thanks."
"Yeah, where you get it?"
"I have no idea..." she stood to her feet, the wall supported her.
"Eh?" The guy stared at her.

She was beautiful to him.

Naomi ran her hand through her hair and sighed quietly. She unstrapped Angellus from her back, only now did she notice how heavy he was.

"You can have it," she held Angellus by the straps out to the guy.
"You serious?!" his eyes widened.
"Yeah, take it," she rubbed her eyes and sighed again.
"Holy shit! Thanks!!" he eagerly grabbed Angellus's straps.

Once Naomi's hand released the strap, the guy snatched it fast away from her. People all around were staring, murmur filled the air. Complaints and questions mainly.

"The hell?.." the guy attempted to hold Angellus up.

Angellus's weight increased rapidly until the guys strength was overcome and he was forced to release Angellus from his grasp. Angellus plunged into the ground beneath it, creating a cavity around itself from its weight.

"Hey, what you pullin' here?" the guy yelled, rubbing his wrist.
"Nothing," she reached down and picked Angellus up, " he just doesn't like you," Naomi strapped him on and began in a separate direction.

Laughter surrounded the guy. He turned and ran away.

"That was cool! How you do that?" a perky girl popped up and asked Naomi.

Naomi got startled and jumped. She looked down at the kid, her eyebrow twitched.

"I didn't, he did," Naomi answered.
"The guitar did?" a blank look on the girls face.
"Yes."
"Cool!!" She smiled big, " Hi! I'm Nia!," she extended her hand.
"Naomi," she shook the girls hand and continued.
"Where you going?" the girl followed.
"Don't know."
" You going to Kyo's concert?"
"Who?" Naomi looked at the girl.
"Kyo. the hunky rock star. The biggest thing to ever happen to Purgatory. Red hair, really tall and muscular and sings really good and plays electric guitar. From "Fallen Grace" the band...You know...."
"Uhh..."
"He has a guitar like yours. Except its black."

Naomi's thoughts raced, she remembered the lady at her exile, "This is Angellus, find his twin, Demona. They look alike, Demona is black though. Find her...." the thought faded, leaving Naomi staring blankly.

"Could this be her wielder?..." she thought, blankly staring....
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